What lurks beneth the surface


Sitting in a crowed room

scanning the crowd

You catch their eye and wonder

are you all you appear to be

the dancing girl in the corner

is she really that bold

or has a glass of wine

unhibited her soul

And the man standing at the bar

is he all you would hope to dare

is he the kind of man

to tie you to the chair

That couple dancing toe to toe

does he chair her up at night

or is she a prima donna

who is an ice queen shining bright

What lurks beneth the surface

of the faces in this crowd

and where is the man

who can see what lies beneath my surface




  1. obeyme15 said,

    March 27, 2013 at 7:50 pm

    I have seen and found a beautiful flower, just like now as the snow melts and the cold ground thaws, with a little nurturing a great thing of beauty springs forth. I found this flower last spring and have loved and cared for it for a years worth of seasons some cold, some very hot. As all things as they grow and go thru the growing pains they get stronger roots and more beautiful. That’s what I found, I will never stop tending to you My Flower. That’s what I have found lurking inside you. The truth and beauty that is MINE

    • loneyheart said,

      March 27, 2013 at 7:53 pm

      i love being nurtured by you. You have helped me grow into a better woman.

      • obeyme15 said,

        March 27, 2013 at 11:52 pm

        You have always been this hidden wonderful woman. I am just the very lucky man that took the time and interest in you to watch you bloom. 🙂

  2. mlbk7 said,

    March 27, 2013 at 8:18 pm

    Wishing you both the best always. xo

  3. ghostwriter3104 said,

    March 28, 2013 at 9:23 pm

    I love your writing style and the message you share 🙂

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